Ikkyuu-san volume 5 manga review

What, you thought I’d dropped Ikkyuu-san, did you? I very nearly have, but I decided to see through the end of the inter-team game first, just for closure. I’m probably going to skim volume 6 really quickly, but the manga isn’t good enough to finish so I’m not going to bother.

The results of the game – Team B managed to reverse Team A’s 10-run lead and beat them, making Coach Iwakaze the new coach, but he’s recruited the other coach to help him groom Ikkyuu. Turns out the other coach has realized Ikkyuu’s potential as well. Yeah, yeah.

Meanwhile Team A pitcher Ootomo has gone missing, and the rest of Team A is pissed off because they blame him for the loss. They’re waiting for him outside his crush Reiko’s birthday party, but Ikkyuu tries to persuade them that ganging up on one guy is not the manly way to do things. Just then several members of Team B challenge Ikkyuu to a one-on-one battle, but then Ikkyuu’s friend Kurou says he wants to fight them, so now he starts fighting Ikkyuu and it’s just a total mess. What a terrible manga.

I’m pretty disappointed with the way Ikkyuu-san has turned out. Normally I love sports stories about characters who don’t know they have a certain skill and then they’re discovered by someone who trains them into a prodigy and then everyone is like WOW, THEY’RE SO GOOD! and stuff. Wish fulfillment, of course, but enjoyable stuff nevertheless. So that’s the kind of stuff I was expecting when I picked this manga up, but it really fails at that.

First off, it skips straight to the WOW, THEY’RE SO GOOD! part without actually showing what makes Ikkyuu so good. He makes rookie mistakes all the time and doesn’t play particularly well until the latest volume, but from the start most side characters have been fawning over him. The people who aren’t crazy about him are his own team mates, and they’re portrayed as dumb and jealous for not realizing how wonderful Ikkyuu is. It’s really annoying because the reader is being painted the same way by association. I gave the Ikkyuu-san manga 5 volumes to impress me and pull me in and it has’t done so, so I think now’s a good time to call it quits. Verdict: Not particularly recommended, even if you’re really bored.

Ikkyuu-san volume 4 manga review

After a bit of a break I tried to get back into Shinji Mizushima’s Ikkyuu-san, but I think I’m going to end up dropping this series after all. Volume 4 and (most likely volumes 5-8 at the rate this is going) covers the winner-takes-all practice match between the first and second-string teams of Kyojin High School, but it’s just painful to read because Ikkyuu sucks so, so badly.

He himself might have an excuse for being so bad since his coach pretty much left him to his own devices, but there’s no reason why he still, after 4 volumes, doesn’t know many of the most basic rules of baseball like forced plays. And the coach puts him on third even though the poor soul can’t catch the most basic grounder — because you didn’t teach him, you idiot!!!!

What’s worse, even after it becomes clear that the opponents are aiming exclusively for Ikkyuu, the other team members don’t budge from their positions to help him out. There’s no law saying the shortstop or the left fielder or the whole team can’t move closer to third base to help Ikkyuu defend, is there? Instead they just stay where they are and whine and complain. The pitcher isn’t off the hook either, since he’s throwing balls that are so easy to hit that that the other guys got 10 runs in one inning without really trying. It doesn’t matter if Ikkyuu can’t catch if the enemy can’t hit your pitches, right?

So everybody sucks and I’m annoyed. At the end of the volume Ikkyuu FINALLY managed to catch something and the sides change, which was like PHEW! Obviously it’s going to turn out that this was all part of Coach Iwakaze’s master plan to awaken Ikkyuu’s true powers, blah blah blah, but it’s going to be a while before I return to Ikkyuu-san to find out what happens next. No wonder this series is so much shorter than Mizushima’s other stuff: it’s really, really frustrating!

Ikkyuu-san volume 3 manga review

Ikkyuu-san is starting to lose steam a bit for me, but most likely volume 3 was the problem and subsequent volumes should be better. Going into the volume I wanted to learn more about Ikkyuu’s background and personality and I also wanted him to get some basic training and learn more about baseball. None of these things have happened. Instead:

– Instead of training with the team, Ikkyuu and his very annoying friend Kurou and some very annoying kids have been doing some very unorthodox training by the riverbank.

– When Ikkyuu and Kurou do show up for regular training, coach Iwakaze just shuffles off and tells everyone to do their own thing.

– We still know nothing about Ikkyuu except his dad sent him to Tokyo with just enough money for a one-way trip. We also learn that he idolizes real-life star Shigeo Nagashima, which is like huh? You know enough about Nagashima to want to be like him and yet you don’t know the first thing about baseball? What, you saw a poster and developed a crush or what?

– Even though Ikkyuu did manage to get some simple training it, it seems he still hasn’t learned the basic rules of baseball. At the end of the volume he doesn’t even know/remember that three outs = a change of sides.

– The love triangle is getting well under way. Pitcher Ootomo likes Reiko, Reiko likes Ikkyuu and Ikkyuu is oblivious to everything except baseball.

The volume ends with the first-string team (with star pitcher Ootomo) facing off against the second-string team. The purpose is supposedly to prove whether coach Iwakaze’s methods were right or not, but most likely the winning coach will take control of both teams since only one can go to Koshien. It will be interesting to see how Ikkyuu’s training has changed him, so I haven’t given up on the manga yet!

Ikkyuu-san volume 2 manga review

Ikkyuu-san is still going strong as of volume 2, but whether this will last till the end of the series or not remains to be seen. I said last time that Ikkyuu’s ‘innocent country boy’ gimmick was getting old, and it most definitely is. The rest of the cast is strong enough that watching their actions and reactions is enjoyment enough, so as long as the focus of the manga stays broad enough we won’t have much of a problem.

The other option would be for Ikkyuu’s personality to gain some much-needed depth. All we know right now is that he’s from the boonies, he somehow managed to grow up as a boy in Japan without even knowing the most basic rules of baseball (?) and he has a sense of justice that comes out as anger when crossed. That’s enough for two volumes, but it’s about time we got to see more to him since the whole series revolves around him.

There’s hope that this might happen though, since volume 2 ended with Ikkyuu’s friend Kurou coming to the ballpark to see him. Ikkyuu is also going to get to meet Reiko, the pretty lady from the last volume who seems to have some sort of relationship with team pitcher Ootomo…? This isn’t an Adachi manga so the non-pitcher actually stands a chance, especially when the manga is named after him. Reiko is as good as ours. So that should help reveal a little more about his background and personality.

With any luck Ikkyuu will also get some basic training in baseball so we don’t have to deal with this “wat is a homerun i dunno duhh’ nonsense any more. It reminds me a bit of Ganbarist Shun where Shun was thrown into a contest without knowing a thing but later became a force to reckon with in the gymnastic world. The parts where he was ignorant were funny, but the show was even better once he did know. I’m hoping that’s what will happen with Ikkyuu-san as well.

Ikkyuu-san volume 1 manga review

More baseball manga! This time from the most prolific and best-known baseball manga specialist in Japan, Shinji Mizushima. He’s the author of such long-running titles as Abu-san (107 volumes and counting) and Dokaben (48+52+45+11 and counting volumes), so while you’ll get your fill of baseball with him, some of titles are rather intimidating to pick up. That’s why I decided to start with Ikkyuu-san, a relative lightweight at only 14 volumes. So far, so good.

The story so far: Ikkyuu Sanada is a country bumpkin from Shizuoka who knows almost nothing about baseball. Somehow (we haven’t been told exactly why/how yet) he is recruited to join the Kyojin Academy High School baseball team, the best team in Tokyo, and arrives just in time to start as clean-up in a practice game against Jingu University, the best college team in Tokyo. What kind of impact will Ikkyuu have in this clash of giants?

Quite a bit, actually. For one thing, despite his protests to the contrary almost no one believes he’s really a newbie, so all the things he does by accident – catching a ball with his bare hand, standing still at the plate because the ball is too fast – are taken as signs that he’s mocking the other team, which infuriates Jingu to no end. So much so that by the end of volume 1 they’ve taken out all their second-string members and put in the best of the best against the Kyojin team. Will this turn the tide for them? We’ll see in volume 2.

Look, it's a book by Tabuchi-kun!
Look, it’s a book by Tabuchi-kun!

I’m enjoying Ikkyuu-san a lot so far, though his unbelievable “I joined a baseball team without knowing diddly about baseball but somehow I am so good at it” shtick got old after a few chapters. You can only have so many comical misunderstandings about the rules of baseball before the reader starts wanting something a little deeper. That said, it is quite amusing how the more he struggles, the more everyone else in the stadium is convinced that he’s actually a genius who is just playing dumb. Will they ever find out the truth?

So it’s funny in its own way, but even better it’s got lots of baseball action right off the bat. No time is being wasted with background stories and tears and long tirades, or even lengthy training sequences. Both teams are elite from the start, they know what they’re doing out there and they’re getting right down to it.

The results of this match is something of a foregone conclusion (but I won’t spoil) but the author still takes the time to chronicle every at-bat and show the thoughts of the pitcher and batter and sometimes even of those in the dugout and in the crowd. I don’t know if I’d want that for all 14 volumes, but for the first match of the game it’s a great way to get to know the characters.

This was considered a great beauty in 1974
This was considered a great beauty in 1974

The art might be old, but baseball is still baseball, the rules haven’t really changed and the action is simply drawn but easy to follow. The only thing that seemed outdated was the super-talented transfer students showing up and suddenly dominating the game tropes. I remember there was an arc in Last Inning dedicated to finding a way to circumvent the fact that schools are now banned from using recruited transfer students for a year in official games or something like that. No such problem in Ikkyuu-san, either because the rule had not been made yet or because the transfer students are first-years (I think?) or because this is a practice game, not an official match.

So it looks like volume 1 was spent introducing the major characters (including a girl who will almost certainly become Ikkyuu’s love interest). I’m guessing volumes 2 and 3 will be used to round up this match and then the story, if it exists, will get underway from volume 4 onwards. If the rest of the series lives up to the promise of the beginning, I’ll be reading all the way through with glee.

Now. Now that I’ve got the ‘review’ out of the way, let me just add as aside that Ikkyuu-san really gets my translator juices flowing. It’s something that would be fun to translate because of all the jokes and comments that depend on the kanji used to write something.

Example: Ikkyuu’s name, 一球 is from the baseball phrase 一球入魂 (put your soul into every ball), so the audience say that to cheer for him sometimes. It would be boring to write reams of text explaining all that, but at the same time I wouldn’t want to leave it in romaji. Would I explain it once then use a replacement cheer every time? I can’t just ignore it because he introduces himself that way.

Reiko, stopping giggling and help me think!
Reiko, stopping giggling and help me think!

Another example: 一休, meaning ‘a short break’ is also pronounced ‘Ikkyuu’, so his team-mates teasingly call him that a few times. Would I fill the bubble with kanji + text, explaining the joke and thus rendering it unfunny? Do I have a choice? Incidentally ‘Ikkyuu’ is also the name of a monk from a Japanese legend as well as a popular cartoon character at the time. That’s referred to a couple of times too, but that wouldn’t be a problem to express.

Example three: At some point a character compares the three transfer students + Ikkyuu to the Three Musketeers plus D’Artagnan. In Japanese Three Musketeers is 三銃士 (sanjuushi) so they change it to  三球士 (sankyuushi) + 一球 = Three ballsketeers + One Ball (Ikkyuu). It works in Japanese but it’s so wordy and unwieldy in English. How best to convey the idea while keeping it interesting? I don’t want to go the ‘copious footnotes’ route. If anything I’d rather translate it away then add a note at the back with all the boring explanations for the people who care. Or, best of all, I’d like to find a pun that works and can be carried all the way through.

But those are just ramblings, it’s not like I’m going to actually do any of this. But it’s fun to speculate sometimes, isn’t it?